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So, here is my entry for snakes-on-a-plane's mini-contest! :dummy:

It's a simple Jo vs. Nemesis fight, since they hate each others guts and would gladly beat the shit out of one another (in my head Nemesis would do that, at the least XD)

but I'm not sure if I did so well, hope I did .w.'' I mostly freaked out about getting Jo right, it's also kinda why I focused on the fighty parts and not so much either characters personalities or expressions (although I did try to put that in there XD)

and on a note, i know you stated Nemesis is stronger than Jo snakes, but I have to say that I do not agree. This is mainly because Nemesis is fucking arrogant, he wouldn't take Jo seriously for the first real fight. He would blow her off and her techniques, so that's why Jo would have an advantage. And that's why Nemesis ended up getting hurt pretty good in this XD

anyways, that's it for tonight, got more stuff coming so sit tight~ see you all later~ *rolls away*

Writing, Nemesis: Crimson-Agony
Jo, Eliot: snakes-on-a-plane
Bleach: Tite Kubo
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XBrokenRiversX's avatar
Wow this is intense. Your writing skills are amazing.

i really like the way you wrote this. The fight scenes are great